Jessica's Posts:
90's Child
Jessica and I had similar experiences with the Internet the
first time around. Although she set up her parents email address and my mom set
up mine, we both used email. She is right on topic with the amazing advances of
the Internet and how far it has come. When she states that the Internet was
“amazing and lame” she never really specified why it was lame, but she went on
to describe the problems she had with it. Those problems were definitely
problems we all dealt with when it came to using the internet for the first
time, including sharing the slow dial up with the phone line in the house. I
remember being able to look up lyrics to my favorite songs online and that was
the coolest thing you could do. She backs up her statement “the internet is the
only way I can function” by listing several reasons how she uses it daily. A
lot of the things she does are more for convenience. It really makes me wonder
how we could do all of these things that she does, before we could search
anything online. Especially navigating our way around.
Web 2.0
Danger, Will Robinson!
I do not agree with the first statement in the positives
section, although there are many things we can do easily and cheaper on the
internet, in no way is it the same as real life. People do things on the
Internet that they would never do in real life. However Jessica backs up her
reason for agreeing with the statement by stating examples of things made
easier in her everyday life that’s to the World Wide Web. I agree that social
networking creates an easy bond between people and their loved ones who may
live far from each other. The fact that Jessica’s family and friends stay in
touch through Facebook is awesome. In the negatives of social networking
portion Jessica said she thought that using ad space on Facebook was a good
idea. I agree with that, it is a quick easy way for word to spread, which is
what social media is good for. When she gave the example about the scientist
and the photographer, I was a little confused but she was correctly stating
that people should be aware of what they post online because once it’s out
there, it’s out there. I 100 % agree with Jessica’s last statement, on the
proper grammar and spelling use. The language used on the Internet even has its
own name. “Leet Speak” is shorthand, slang of the English language, which is
most common. Social networking is not meant to be scholastic, so I see nothing wrong
with improper spelling and use of grammar as long as someone can see the
difference.
Inspire me!
Jessica painted a picture in her blog for someone who might
not have seen the videos she was watching. However this post had a few spelling
mistakes that showed she might not have re-read it before posting it. Also she
could have started off with a brief description of what a self-portrait is. Her
description of the first self-portrait had some points I agree with, including
that the text in the video was helpful from keeping it too monotonous. The
second description, Jessica said that it made her think of “a picture is worth
a thousand words.” That is a very solid reference to describe the video,
especially since she backed it up by stating that the author didn’t use text or
music with words. Kia is right on with her third review. She makes solid points
about why everything in the self-portrait works with the message being
conveyed, for example that the portrait was in Black and White which helped
portray the raw emotion and that the use of animation fit perfectly. I agree
that it was definitely one of the best videos we had to watch on the creative
side, and how brave the man was for putting his story out on the Internet. I
hope it was an encouraging thing to help him lose weight, I feel as though if
you want to do something telling everyone you’re going to encourages someone
even more in order to not let others around them down.
Justin's Posts:
All Access
Pass
It is very true that kids used the Internet instead of the
phone to talk to more than one or two people at a time. It’s too funny that for
a while I also used my old AIM screen name for user names for the longest time.
With all the different log-ins and passwords it’s easier to keep most of them
the same. Justin uses great examples of the differences between the Internet
back then and now. When he states that it was more convenient than using the
phone even with dial up and now it has pretty much replaced the phone that is
very true. When he mentioned that people use social media to meet other
students at their school, it was interesting because originally Facebook was
created just for college students to be able to network with each other. How
awesome that you could literally meet your roommate before you lived with them.
The point about the businesses using Facebook is also very true. Things on
Facebook and twitter have the power of spreading like wildfire, which is great
for any business or message to reach mass amounts of people at a time, and
because of Web 2.0 they can interact with the people receiving the message.
Web 2.0 and
You
The first sentence “is thought to be a bunch of things in
one” sounds a little weird, maybe “is considered to be many things in one.”
Also “can create there own page” should be “their.” Wikipedia is a unique
example of Web 2.0, I never thought of that being Web 2.0! I guess you could
say it is Web 2.0 in its rarest form, because anyone is allowed to contribute
and change whatever is put on there. Justin statements about people wanting
things now and right at their fingertips and how they are always looking
forward to the newest thing are very true. Some of the information, though very
good, is repetitive. For example how Web 2.0 cannot be defined is mentioned
twice and how people want info at their fingertips. Web 2.0 is great for anyone
being able to create their own websites is true, but why? Why would someone
want to create a website for anything?Pros and Cons of Social Media
Self Portrait Discussion
The task of critiquing someone else’s critique was a task
all in itself. When you become so close with your group members you want to
give them praise, and relate to them instead of tearing apart what they had
written. But, in the end the things you say and the edits you make can only
help better a person. Overall I think Jessica and Justin did a great job.


















